Write about the following topic:
In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, the popularity of Media has increased significantly. Even though many youngsters are attracted to the media, quite a few are the ones who either fetch news either from the television or the newspaper. In this essay, we will discuss about the cause and suggest a solution to it with relevant examples.
To start with, the younger generation gets influenced by sugary-coated media or superstars. Also, some focus on sports or any other sections in which they are most interested. I think it is because of the modern lifestyle personal matters are covered for superstar or businessmen. For instance, the king of Bollywood or any other actors are followed by journalists. In addition, journalism has changed a lot from patriotism into business these days. We have identified the cause now, what can the solution might be?
Secondly, although there might be distractions to following news, the solution must be given some suggestions. Such as, the newspaper should be modified with some contests, magazines, or hidden gifts on a weekly basis until the kids habituate and become an educated civilian. Furthermore, they should be encouraged to read regularly. Also, the governments should fine unfavourable journalists or media persons who are disheartening the youths and failing to nurture the patriotism.
To recapitulate, we have discussed the causes and solutions on how to decrease their likeness towards fake news and increase in an opposite way. I think that the most possible cause of this latest issue is the journalism overturned bribery business should be controlled by the public sectors so that the truth should prevail.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in an opposite way" with adverb for "opposite"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27099236641 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98075964051 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629770992366 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.80652501 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183454762953 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561849149071 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495507604473 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105568221133 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038585565588 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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