In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
Newspaper and TV is a prominent way to follow news. However, research shows that their viewership does not include young popluation. In this essay, I will outline possible reasons for alienation of adolescents and propose possible solutions.
Firstly, presentation and language used in electronic and print media do not attract young people. Newspaper uses difficult and technical words, which generally used in specific profession but extremely difficult to be understood by school and college students. For example, to provide market analysis, reporter uses keywords like bottom line & top line, which is difficult to be understand unless one has knowledge of finance. TV and Newspaper should refine their content and make it more attractive for youth. For instance, TV can make use of cartoons to describe certain news and newspaper can provide facts in tabular, list forms rather than writing lengthy, boring , complex sentences.
In addition, in current education curriculum, there is no place for current affairs. Teacher and parents do not emphasize to students on importance of being aware of current affairs. There is no specific subject where news is being discussed and analysed, Therefore, students dosen't understand importance of news in their life. As a solution, school should have dedicated subject on general knowledge and students should get garding same as any other mainstream subjects. School should organize frequent quizzes on news and parents should encourage their children to participate in those quizzes.
To conclude, This is extremely important for youngster to understand what's going on this world. Media and schools should mold their modus operandi to engage our future generation to make a world a better living place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48888888889 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7603611042 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618518518519 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4977307569 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155023557083 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558747985389 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429759786439 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962285979978 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355270677886 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.