Many doctors are concerned about the high use of computer games by children and young
people. What mental and physical problems may arise from excessive use of these games? How
could these problems be reduced?
Wide spread of computer games especially in younger generation, is a major concern in medical practitioners across the globe. According to them a lot of deformities both physical and behavioural can occur if child is obsessed with video games. This essay will outline some of these concerns and highlights possible solutions.
Admittedly, one cannot deny excessive use of these indoor games drive the child to a sedative lifestyle which intern leads him\her to obesity. Inactive lifestyle is major concern among parents, school authorities and pediatricians. It has been proved by many studies that physically active student performs better in studies compared to physically inactive. Moreover, outdoor sports like football etc. not only improve aesthetics of child but also, improve team building and coordination skills which are necessity for his\her future jobs. On the other hand, video games will make him/her secluded and a loner.
Another impact, is on child’s behavior, it has been observed through various studies children suffering from addiction of video games tends to develop a more irritating behavior. Continues mood swings are now categorized under Bipolar disorder by psychiatrists. According to some studies this kind of behavioural traits can have detrimental effects on overall personality of an adolescent. Research shows children suffering Bipolar are either depressed or suffer from anxiety which can led juvenile delinquencies.
One plausible solution, is to increase indulgence of youngsters into physical sports. This can start from school. Educational institution should give more focus on regular sports meets. Sports should be included as integral part of study curriculum. Another convincing solution is that, parents should devote more time to children for example, taking them to park etc. which will not only deviate child’s mind away from video games but also strengthen parent-child relationship.
In the end to sum up, too much use of computer games can drag child to unhealthy lifestyle and poor intrapersonal skills. Parents and teacher can play important role to bring child out of this vicious lifestyle by encouraging pupils to pursue more active pursuits.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, for example, kind of, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62089552239 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89389090827 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638805970149 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4822200661 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9523809524 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04761904762 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174582392767 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465405404619 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044669439876 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954603114205 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302621517366 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.02 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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