Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?
It is argued that, nowadays, a significant number of museums and historical sites are generally more visited by tourists rather than the local people. There are myriad factors associated with this and this essay will give some possible measures to promote such type of sites.
To begin with the reasons, the first prime cause is that local people already familiar with the myths and heroes of a particular region. They know their legends and their contribution to society, and because of this they do not find any new information in these places. Consequently, they started showing less interest towards museums and historical places. Another gigantic factor is that mainly these informational centers are old and are equipped with old technology such as pictures, handwritten articles instead of any modern means. There are no audio visual system which assist a person to retain the interest in the information. Additionally, with the presence of these items even an uneducated person can gain knowledge.
Turning towards the measures which can enhance the visiting of people in these places. First of all, museum administration has to introduce some policies in which they can share the information regarding legends across the world. Tourists from outer regions will also glad after seeing a hero from their continent. This will also intensifies the pace of locals visit to historical site as everyday everyone will learn new things. Apart from this, higher authorities should introduce modern equipments such as laser and 3D painting, computers, internet so that people can also search something to their own. Displaying information through visuals is beneficial.
In conclusion, museums and historical places are a common heritage of a nation and it is the duty of officials to maintain all the infrastructure concerned with these sites to promote their work
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'intensify'
Suggestion: intensify
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, regarding, so, apart from, as to, in conclusion, such as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31418918919 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76231347433 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581081081081 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2691000944 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.866666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280357706837 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877768727568 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847185376113 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174711217753 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05947463662 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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