Many newspapers and magazines feature stories about the private lives of famous people We know what they eat where they buy their clothes and who they love We also often see pictures of them in private situations Is it appropriate for a magazine or newspaper to give this kind of private information about people?
Firstly it is very common for these famous bollywood celebrities, politicians and business tycoon who are always in frame of social media and television or newspaper for their daily life style which they are living but some of the stories are fake in social media or TV news channel.
What I belief that today’s generation is more interested about their celebrities personal life where did he or she go and with whom they met personally and moreover every person have their own privacy but media channel people are always want to bring them in their front page for news TRP growth, on the other hand some news are good to show how any actor or actress have become successful after so much struggle in their life and how they overcome from such hurdles and become successful.
But at some point there is some fake news too just for popularity or money gain, to bring down the stardom of any celebrities by just posting inappropriate picture or personal details in magazines or newspaper so they can sold out as much as they can but some news are also for haters or infamous people those who want to misuses of their power or money to be in frontline news, but this happen in every famous person ups and downs of their life.
In conclusion, some magazines or newspaper are good to ready while some are not, but this is their business to run their company and earn money or people attention by indulging famous star or politicians.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 220, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ly life style which they are living but some of the stories are fake in social media or TV ...
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Line 2, column 8, Rule ID: BELIEF_BELIEVE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'believe' (verb) instead of belief (noun)?
Suggestion: believe
...ocial media or TV news channel. What I belief that today’s generation is more interes...
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Line 2, column 116, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'goes'.
Suggestion: goes
...ities personal life where did he or she go and with whom they met personally and m...
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Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'sell'
Suggestion: sell
...s in magazines or newspaper so they can sold out as much as they can but some news a...
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Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'misuse'.
Suggestion: misuse
...rs or infamous people those who want to misuses of their power or money to be in frontl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63137254902 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39378279684 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552941176471 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 63.0 20.2975951904 310% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.002136733 49.4020404114 237% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 295.25 106.682146367 277% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.75 20.7667163134 307% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.0 7.06120827912 297% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229999931546 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143602196386 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0211582530489 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143602196386 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211582530489 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.3 13.0946893788 247% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.99 50.2224549098 32% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 11.3001002004 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.2 10.1190380762 269% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.