It is generally observed that criminals commit crimes again after they have been punished. While there are various reasons such as prison style and the need to money, some solutions can be done by the government and societies to solve this problem.
There are two main reasons for reoffending. First, the prison style can lead to more illegal behavior because prisoners are put together where they make friends with each other. In addition, they may share their experiences and information about how they have committed the crimes. A second reason is that they do not have money for living due to crimes record that makes finding a job more difficult. Therefore, they become poor and ready to join any gangs.
Several actions can be taken to help offenders avoid recommitting. The government should focus on rehabilitation. For instance, prisoners can receive an education of vocational training and practical skills such as car maintenance, graphic design or handmade craft. These professions can help them to get a job in the future and this will be beneficial to society. Furthermore, Community service is a way to reform offenders that could be a solution to prison overcrowding. For example, they may join to a non-profit organization that can deliver meals to senior citizens and homeless individuals or can teach certain skills to disadvantaged youth. As result, they avoid the negative influence that prison can have and it makes offenders useful in their local communities.
To conclude, it is true that many re-offenders often commit serious crimes. However, this issue can be solved by focus on rehabilitation and the helping of society to accept them after out of prison.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16363636364 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84477540545 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603636363636 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4292674111 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.75 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236518160561 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747734282325 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544450377922 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162897392268 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056623380937 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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