Many people are involved in sports when they are young but stop once they are adults.
Why do many adults stop doing physical exercise?
What can be done about this problem?
It is observed that people stop doing physical activities as they start working. There are various reasons behind this such as lack of time and access to appropriate resources for sports. However, various solutions can be adopted by people to get involved in physical activities.
One of the primary reasons for people to not participate in sports is lack of time. The majority of them are working and having longer working hours. In addition, many of them stay far from their workplace and need to spend approximately two hours for commutation. This leaves little time for them to play any sport or do exercise. Another reason is that, many people do not have access to a gym or local club where such activities are arranged. This is because they live far away from cities in the suburbs where such clubs and sports centers do not exist. Thus, it is very difficult for them to do exercise.
There are numerous steps that can be taken to solve these problems. Firstly, people should arrange their schedule in a way that gives them at least 30 minutes for physical activity. They can go to bed 30 minutes earlier and get up a little early to play a sport or go to a gym. Secondly, people can go to running, walking or do floor exercise at home in case they do not have facilities in nearby places. This will help them to remain fit without much effort.
In conclusion, due to lack of time and appropriate resources, people stop playing sports. However, measures can be taken such as a change in daily routine and involved in less demanding activities such as walking, running or home workout, they can be involved to remain physically fit.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, at least, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66206896552 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4959991768 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.351125586 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5294117647 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0588235294 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32670272747 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103455334717 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745875743208 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207721895762 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284452150039 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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