Many people are now opting to provide technology companies with their personal data in exchange for access to the software.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages.
It is argued that these days many people are deciding to give access to the technology firms with their private information in return for permission to use the software. This essay will argue that despite there being potential security risks while providing data, the benefit of being educated about new products far outweigh any drawback.
Admittedly, there is a basic drawback of security concern, because some companies published the personal data of a client at some platforms without their consent. Due to which there is a threat that some people assumes fake identities on the internet, misuse this data and demand ransom for reciprocating the crime. For instance, in 2017 in the United Kingdom, a gang was accused of cyber-crime, they were involved in identity theft, and credit card frauds by using personal data of software users. However, confidential data sharing does not need to be like this and concerns could be reduced if people choose wisely by not given the opportunity to be scammed and confirm that whether the company is genuine or fake.
Despite the drawback above, data sharing by the customer begets benefits in terms of getting awareness about products and services in the market. In other words, many software houses sell data to the advertising companies and in return, costumer gets the latest and up-to-date information about a plethora of products without doing any laborious work. For example, a survey report published in the Daily Times of America reveals that 74% of the users find data sharing useful in terms of getting the latest information. This opportunity means that an exchange of data with the software excess is very worthwhile and eclipses any fear of security threats.
To conclude, the data exchange gives a person a chance to get know-how about enormous new trends far outweighs the supposed disadvantage of being exploited while sharing personal information.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19032258065 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64237658297 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574193548387 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 24.0862774278 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 146.272727273 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1818181818 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305108937571 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109496534902 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561515543462 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177770808928 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506545592925 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.