Many people are spending lot of money on their weddings. Do you think this is a good thing?
Marriage – an intimate affair where two people announce to the world that they have found their life partners. Nowadays people are spending sumptuous amount in order to make this event memorable. In my opinion, celebrating this big day with relatives and friends is important, but couples should make cognitive decision about their budget and risk appetite because in future they might have few major financial necessities which are more important than extravagant wedding.
Without any doubt, wedding parties are good for the society and as well for couples because it brings a lot of people together to make the event big. Nowadays people stay in different parts of the world which give them less opportunity to meet all their family members regularly. Hence parties like this are certainly a way to meet all the family members and enjoy together. Furthermore, these festivities also include many fun games and cultural activities like dance, music therefore it makes these guest feel rejuvenated, entertained. For example, for many individuals, dancing is a stress buster and makes them feel liberated.
Although celebrations are liberating and brings people together, organising these require a lot of money and time. Celebrations are integral part of the culture, but size of celebration varies from person to person because financial flexibility varies from each other. For instance, Forbes list billionaire generally host these parties in five-star or seven-star hotels and still they might not feel any financial burden, but it’s daunting to expect same scale of celebration from low-income family. In addition, though not all couples are capable of funding it from their savings, they go an extra mile to make it as an extravagant event which eventually will increase their future financial burden. Because of this debt they might have to forego few important future needs. By considering all these menaces, couple should make concrete plan about wedding celebration which should necessarily include financial planning for future as well as for D-day apart from cultural activities.
In conclusion, though weddings are entertaining and joyful, expense planning should be considered before hosting these luxurious event. If they end up in huge liabilities, they might not be able to fulfil all the future requirements.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...increase their future financial burden. Because of this debt they might have to forego ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, still, therefore, well, apart from, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1980.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42465753425 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73111523553 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564383561644 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8811466459 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.75 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8125 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1875 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12991096369 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502487716052 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470759003624 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078501626795 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523288684466 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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