The media is increasing interest in famous people who have ordinary background. Why do you think people are interested in the lives of people? Do you think this is a good thing?
Story of ordinary people who have a succeeded in their life, and has become famous is so appealing for many people. Due to this reason, media has increased more attention to this agenda. Aspiration is a significant factor in which people follow a successful person. Also, positive feeling and sense of joy are good things that this kind of attention will bring. In this essay, I will outline these points in details.
People are more inspired by people who have a similar background to them. First, they find more power in themselves. When they found out how this person could achieve their goals, they aspire by themselves quickly. In one study indicate that more than eighty percent of people are motivated while they are watching the lives of famous people with ordinary background, and more than forty percent tries to follow the rule of this people after they understood their life. So it is essential to bring some famous people to have more message for the people.
Besides aspiration, this coverage in media has different positive aspects. First, it brings hope to the people. It gives them a sense of power to reach their potential. Second, this kind of story indicate that success is not only for the people who have a unique talent, but also it will become potential while the determination and vision are precise for us.
All in all, media by making this kind of episode for people brings more attention to the people who think that life is not fair, and success is only in the hand of a particular person. Unlike this belief, this kind of story will give them a new way to see people’s lives and particularly his/ her life as well.
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...and particularly his/ her life as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, second, so, well, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74048442907 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39579337841 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501730103806 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3957069805 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.625 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0625 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312607899611 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106334117309 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853527606551 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202040653503 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516755652675 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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