Successful companies use advertising to make more sales, what can make an advertisement very effective? Do you think this is a bad thing or a good thing for society?
There are different ways exit to enhance sales. So prestigious company will use advertisement as a channel to make more revenue. It is good to implement this strategy more wisely because the concept of advertisement should tempt the consumer as well as respect to the culture of community. In my opinion, advertisement should be seen as an opportunity for a society to raise some new facility.
To begin with, internet have become more accessible so that more people get used to it. Hence, it will be effective, and less costly to promote services or product throughout internet. For instance, youtube channel is now used widely instead of using cable TV, and due to this reason tones of advertisement, which most of them are less than 4 seconds have been constructed that is shown in middle of each videos. Likewise, advertisement is now is an art and there are so many expertise works on it. Because it is important to stand out among many competitors which is now vital. So, if advertising strategy implement wisely, it would enhance competitive advantages for companies.
However, this strategy have some downsides that should consider it. First, if company use it excessively, it will damage their reputation. Second, if it is not construct according to the belief of people it would cause a lot of problem. For example, in religious countries particularly in my home country, IRAN, Advertisement Company should not promote their products by showing off women. Therefore, the concept of promotion by advertising should determine prior production.
To conclude, making profit is now determine if you could buy more. As a result, advertisement still are the more effective way in compare with other strategy. So company invest more on this strategy while they should consider different aspects if you are working globally. Because each nations have different understanding regarding different subject. Even if it uses as an only source it is not as effective as it is. The company should provide different solution such as social media or referrals for making .
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of problems'.
Suggestion: a lot of problems
... to the belief of people it would cause a lot of problem. For example, in religious countries pa...
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Line 7, column 35, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'determined'.
Suggestion: determined
...on. To conclude, making profit is now determine if you could buy more. As a result, adv...
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Line 7, column 274, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nt aspects if you are working globally. Because each nations have different understandi...
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Line 7, column 510, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... as social media or referrals for making .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, likewise, regarding, second, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14201183432 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94075588563 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55325443787 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8337347794 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7619047619 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0952380952 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292557494623 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863681816386 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615193092048 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193057479528 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076114113682 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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