Successful companies use advertising to make more sales. What can make an advertisement very effective? Do you think this is a bad thing or a good thing for the society?
In recent years, the leading companies and industries have been involving in huge consumerizing with the use of effective advertisement. These businesses often use famous television stars and child comic heroes to attract more people to buy products. In my opinion, It is not a good practice for locals because, it creates and indulge folks in unnecessary wants such as cravings for junk food, branded clothing and harmful makeup. In this essay, we will discuss them in detail and my opinion will be given at the end.
Let us begin with the, what ways are used by the companies to make the advertisement more effective. The number one way is hiring famous people such as sports stars, T.V stars to promote their goods. The Reason behind, they act as an icons for the youngsters. A number a youth nowadays follow them for their styles, figures and luxuries. So, when they saw their admirers are representing any products. They tend to buy and follow those things. Eventually, this enhance the sale of the company. Second on the list, the famous companies use the high quality of cameras to increase the effectivity of the final results. Because of that maximum number of people indulge in excess buying. without considering the fact that, every individual genetic makeup is different from another person. So, the results will be different. To illustrate this, the makeup companies everyday launch new products and claim, these products will bring best in your skin. But the reality is not same. However, it increase companies earings.
In my opinion, it is not an effective way to distract people from getting involved in expense especially the small kids who pester their parents to buy unuseful things such as toy cars and unhealthy food like ice-creams, candies and chocolates. Despite that, these sugary stuff creat more cavities and ruin their overall health and also put extra burden on parents. Next to it, it will increase the chances of indulging society in bad habits such as smoking and drinking. Demonstrating tobacco advertisements on television pushing our nation towards the end of having unhealthy people. Eventually, our countries economy will suffer.
In conclusion, numerous companies nowadays using various tools to earn huge amount of money by displaying fake advertisements. I strongly believe that these adverts have bad impact on our society if not followed wisely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, as to, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2005.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12787723785 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68457178113 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606138107417 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.8774101221 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.64 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206502353453 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449729309512 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525907649385 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110738288385 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268647945054 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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