With an increasing number of people eating fast food, which if eating too regularly can cause health issues, some people think that the only solution is to ban it completely.
The fast-food industry is becoming more popular in industrialized countries. Families work hard to cover their expenses, such as a mortgage, car lease, child education, etc. There so, eating habits are drastically have changed in recent years. The more people tend to consume saturated food with salt and oil. As a result, some people argue that fast food should completely prohibit in order to secure people’s health. In this essay, I will discuss a different solution to control this problem in modern society.
Fast food is appealing, and most families and their child would like to go there weekly or monthly to enjoy and pass their times. So if people would like to get rid of these habits, society needs to bring alternatives for them. Or, it is better to educate them on how to choose their food more wisely. For instance, some study indicates that the more Japanese have less heart attack, or other diseases in compare with western society due to the reason that more people consume fish, vegetables in their food. Moreover, one Japanese walk around two kilometers daily, which is not common in other nations. Consequently, health care education will persuade people to think about their food.
Even though fast food industry can harm people’s health, they can utilize it as a will to improve trade and health together. In recent years, the healthier restaurant has established, and they have advertised throughout countries. Nowadays much fast food restaurant is added salads in their menu. So people have more option than before. Indeed, organic foods or calories determined in their menus. Moreover, restaurants have a detailed menu which are listed all ingredients for their meals. In fact, people have now become more aware of their choice, and they would like to consume better food.
In conclusion, it is not possible to ban people to east fast food. In my opinion, there are some alternative apparent for families to regulate their food consumption. If people would understand how they can sustain their health care, they choose the best option for themselves.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ssible to ban people to east fast food. In my opinion, there are some alternative ...
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Suggestion:
... choose the best option for themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09912536443 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59289742731 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562682215743 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0374193057 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5909090909 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77272727273 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265685359976 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865762170577 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697010027763 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184379161582 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305758787024 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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