Some people think it is important to spend a lot of money on a wedding celebration, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Marriage is holy, and they respect in many nations. Because some people argue that the wedding should be unique and there so money could not consider while others disagree with this comment. In my opinion, money should spend wisely to make your event special.
Money does not matter at the wedding. The matter is that what the groom would like. This means that if people eventually chose their soul mate there so this makes them happier than before mainly if you are not old enough or even a young boy. So the parents obligated to pay the cost of their joyfulness. Some people believe that this ceremony only occurs once for many people. Due to this reason, parents should have made a special moment for their guest. Thus, nowadays, a lot of young couples tend to differentiate themselves from others. For instance, they rent a helicopter for commuting, or they hold in foreign countries and invite their guest to the ceremony. So it seems to be that the wedding becomes luxury phenomena across the globe.
On the other hand, there are some downsides that should consider it. First, if some parents couldn’t tolerate such a cost for their children, it would affect on couple relationship at an early stage of new life. Likewise, if young couples believe that money is the only source of happiness, it would lose their faith in a relationship. Spending more money becomes a culture in many nations for this special event. For instance, nowadays a lot of celebrities hold astonishing ceremonies which indicate that
In sum, there is numerous reason exist behind this phenomena. Cultural belief or one-day special event would cause that people take quickly out money from their pocket, while this unreasonable cost might impact on couples relationship and they become their wedding as a nightmare instead of a memorable day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, likewise, so, thus, while, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96103896104 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47200551509 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564935064935 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.5097078229 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8888888889 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160955302307 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542188878802 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573757944329 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121950628088 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712580163857 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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