Many people say that globalization and the growing number of multinational companies harm the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Pollution, global warming has significant issues nowadays. More developing countries devote more money to prevent earth and as whole people’s life from deterioration. Indeed, more people are now opposed with growing of companies around the world which is now just looked after the profit not taking care of the environment. In my opinion, although some opportunities create, there are some issues such as diminishing of land cultivation, and polluting OF air with carbon dioxide have been constructed by this phenomena.
By emerging technology, companies could find more opportunities across the globe. Mainly, most western companies have established their manufacturing process in less- developed countries. As a result, people could find a proper job which is secure and long-lasting. Also, in this way, companies become tax-free and could efficiently operate without less constraint, such as environmental issues.
On the flip side, companies most often don’t regulate their process to meet standards, especially when it comes to the environment. They put most of their waste material into the water. Consequently, the water contaminated and as a result land cultivation lost. For instance, in Bangladesh, one German food company has an impact on rice growth on some cultivated farms because they poured gasoline into the water, which was the part of processing that unintentionally enter the gasoline in the water. Likewise, still, coal has been used widely throughout the world as a source of energy. It is cheap and unfortunately when it burns they provide a lot of carbon dioxide into the air. In more western countries it has been banned for many years, while in many countries it has not been regarded seriously. This discrimination among a nation became a fortune for big companies. It is also interesting that if a big company produce pollution into the air in western country, they should pay taxes whereas in the third world countries this is not an issue. So, this vast opportunity tempts more thriving companies not care about environmental issues.
In sum, profit becomes a necessity for many companies in this fast-paced environment. So environmental issues have less attractive for them. Also, job availability in less powered countries is focal issues for the politician, which make them reluctant to put some pressure on companies which they do not obey standards. It is not a good path for next-generation because if we continue in this way, we will deplete all sources of life for food and clean air.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, likewise, look, so, still, third, whereas, while, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2138.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29207920792 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03779334598 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542079207921 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5414536996 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1818181818 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.59090909091 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130441942795 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404547731581 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372827932288 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848087255812 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00919600149238 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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