Many people believe that criminals should be imprisoned; others, however, say they should do unpaid work that is beneficial for the community. Do you agree and disagree? Give your opinion and relevant examples.
As all we know, around the world, crimes and criminals have uncompensatable effects on people and society. Some people think they should stay in jails and do nothing. However, other say they have to work without paying no money.
Those who are in favour of criminals should be imprisoned believe that being in prison and having no choice to do anything is the worsen punishment. For instances, they cannot go out or do their works. Then, they are not able to see their families in every time they want. In addition, all the time, prison guard controls them and they do not have full facilities. So, when their condemnation duration finished and they got free, they will recite these days, consequently, they avoid doing any crime.
The opponents believe that, they should do unpaid work that is beneficial for the country. Because, working have a lot of benefits for both sides. Such as, doing some postponed structural affairs, owing to, lack of workforce or money. In this condition, they do not any money to anyone. Beside these benefits, it can be effective for prisoner by putting rewards for them for example, decreasing their prisoning duration if they do their work in best way. As well, they can get skills in many different courses. As a result, when they get free, they are helpful to the society and will be able to meet their needs of themselves and their families.
That is perfectly true to say that prisoner should do unpaid work that is beneficial for the country. I strongly support this idea. As I mentioned in the previous lines, it has a lot of good effects on society and people. Additionally due to work pressure and did not obtain any money, they never miss the prison and do not commit any crime.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... and having no choice to do anything is the worsen punishment. For instances, they cannot ...
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Line 5, column 443, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the best'.
Suggestion: in the best
...risoning duration if they do their work in best way. As well, they can get skills in ma...
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Line 5, column 488, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...st way. As well, they can get skills in many different courses. As a result, when they get fre...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
... of good effects on society and people. Additionally due to work pressure and did not obtain...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73178807947 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47661976374 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543046357616 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9243443031 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2105263158 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8947368421 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42105263158 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349682307137 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12349429343 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997029097661 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234794862986 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249993855099 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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