In this era of technology advancement, things are dramatically changing in each section like transport, communication, education and many others. However, it is a debatable topic that either pen and paper study system is a good medium or smart classes. I am articulating my points of view in the ensuing paragraphs.
To commence with, it is an irrefutable fact that there is always a teacher required who plays a crucial role in primary education. Since teenagers are keen to learn and do ample mistakes and it can be ameliorated by pen and paper system because a tutor can easily invigilate the every individual student. Moreover, there might be chances that pupils will do different errors which is a strenuous task to identify and assist them individually in smart classes.
On the flip side, In the future, science and technology will play a vital role and owing to this it is mandatory that children should be acquainted with the latest technology and learn things smartly. Smart classes have intriguing visualization for puzzels, story and many other subjects which make it alluring and students attract these subjects. Furthermore, another advantage of this system is that it is ecofriendly. Numerous amount of trees have been destroyed for books and copy in in pen and paper study system, However, most of the materials are used in form of data in smart classes.
To recapitulate, taking into account of all the above-mentioned facts, I think children should be taught traditionally in their primary education and after that, they should involve in the smart classes learning system. It will help in their comprehensive growth.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 486, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
... have been destroyed for books and copy in in pen and paper study system, However, mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13805970149 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94518827823 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597014925373 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6235978963 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.75 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0906267960666 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336234565265 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0264592653883 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0578339701037 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406080242777 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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