Education is an integral part of everyone's life and it assist in comprehensive development of a person. However a fair amount of people opine that the main of schools is to help in growing socially and professionally rather than individual development. I disagree with this argument with certain extent and articulating my points of views in the ensuing paragraphs.
To commence with, in this era of materialism where most of the students study to get a good job and earn to fulfill their requirements and due to this trend academic degrees used mainly for apply to job. Apart from this, society also never respect a educated people until the student will well settled or have a good position in any organization. Such mentality not only demoralize the enthusiasm of student, but also thrust them to brink of as drastic as suicide if they will not get a lofty position. For instance, in a recent survey, it has been observed that a huge percentage of youth mentally disturb due to pressure of not getting a suitable job offer after completion of the degree courses.
On the other side, the real meaning of literacy is to develop their individual growth which make them versatile. the main aim of education is to enhance the vision, thought process and handle the situation in a humble way. A famous industrialist in India Ratan Tata stated that the nation never get a scholar until the student taught for their individual growth. The country will get only servant if they will instill for employment. For instance, Bill Gates is an live example of who support this argument and running their own business.
To recapitulate, taking into account all the facts mentioned above, I reckon that schools should focus on students's personal growth, however social and personal growth can not be despised.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, thus, well, apart from, for instance, i reckon
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9375 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74571365459 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615131578947 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8032512516 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.461538462 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143438941311 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479732513648 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519083171127 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875219015892 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612462145937 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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