Many people believe that having a fix punishment for all crime is more efficient.
What are the advantage and disadvantages of having a fix punishment?
Most of the individuals think that it is better to punish the criminal with an equal value in sentences. I totally and strongly disagree with this view because justice is not to mean equality, but, in this essay we just discuss the benefits and drawbacks of this opinion.
As one of the cons of fix punishment, People are different and have several behavior and beliefs. So consider about the difference between people and their situation lead to having several flexible punishments. For instance, a woman who robs some stuff in a supermarket for her children because of starvation should be considered as a criminal who committed crime intentionally or committed the minor offence as the comparison with a murderer who kills someone because of earning money. One of the pros of flexible punishment is that the influences of the crime have been emphasized. Each crime has its own reflection and affects victim differently, therefore, it is essential to have different punishment for different crimes. For example, the murderer punishment undoubtedly should be higher than shop robbery; hence, the effect of killing someone is irrecoverable and it is not fair to punish the murderer as the same as other criminal such as a robber.
The benefit of the fix sentences is to make the judge much easier. It just needs to write down a law about crimes punishment and the court just run out the sentence. Judge need to focus on finding the guilty persons and after that, it is the time to punish them surely and independently. As an illustration, when a person kills someone no matter the murderer was mentally ill or not, he/she should have maximum punishment and discrimination is not allowed.
In conclusion, most of the people considered that it would be fair if the entire criminal has an equal punishment without thinking about what was the crime exactly. We debate pros and cons above and give some examples.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun behavior seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some behavior'.
Suggestion: some behavior
...nishment, People are different and have several behavior and beliefs. So consider about the diff...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iminal who committed crime intentionally or committed the minor offence as the co...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.226361031519 0.247107183377 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.151862464183 0.155533422707 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0859598853868 0.0946595960268 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0573065902579 0.0501214627716 114% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0372492836676 0.0437548338989 85% => OK
Prepositions: 0.131805157593 0.122226691241 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0286532951289 0.0403226058552 71% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82223647321 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.025787965616 0.0326793684256 79% => OK
Particles: 0.00573065902579 0.00163938923432 350% => OK
Determiners: 0.123209169054 0.0861772015684 143% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0114613180516 0.021408717616 54% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0143266475645 0.011925033212 120% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1916.0 1933.35771543 99% => OK
No of words: 322.0 316.048096192 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.95031055901 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20517956788 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.350931677019 0.374742101984 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.276397515528 0.28420135186 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.201863354037 0.203846283523 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.127329192547 0.137316102897 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82223647321 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.037074148 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531055900621 0.56093040696 95% => OK
Word variations: 55.5249913145 60.7387585426 91% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.7743622355 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1545882085 49.517814964 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.857142857 127.492653851 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7743622355 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.642857142857 0.814263465372 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 50.6397515528 49.1944974215 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.56976744186 1.69124875643 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341584857331 0.332605444948 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.099318647074 0.102741220458 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0496885265929 0.0668466124924 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.567585116889 0.534860350844 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.136981984133 0.148594505496 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148686161141 0.134430193775 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677365439918 0.0742795772207 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.37427139753 0.324371583561 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0823475163912 0.0638462369009 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220447517184 0.228012699653 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732709780907 0.058150111329 126% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.68436873747 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 5.90881763527 17% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 11.0 2.5751503006 427% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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