Many people believe money is a very important factor for achieving happiness. Others, however, believe that money has nothing to do with happiness. Discuss both views and give you own opinion.
As to the role of money for getting happiness, most of the time, the society is divided in their opinion. A section of people opines that it plays a significant role in gaining happiness, while others are not in accord with them. This essay intends to discuss both the views followed by my stand.
On the one side, the propensity to enjoy newer products and services available in the world is the major reason making people believe that money is an important requirement for happiness. We live in a consumerist society, and having sufficient funds can only satisfy the thurst of having the latest gizmos, automobiles, amenities, and many more. Another prominent reason is money is needed for leisure activity. Admittedly, everyone is running for making their careers, and amidst this pressurized
target-oriented routine, people want to enjoy holidays with family members to relax and rejuvenate; only surplus monetary funds can avail these benefits.
On the other side, there are countless factors for proponents for whom money is not pivotal for being happy. Firstly, a group of people finds satisfaction in pursuing a job for which they are passionate irrespective of the money they receive as a remuneration. For instance, a navy officer is content with his duty, despite less salary as all he wants is to serve his country and recognition in society. Secondly, for close-knit families, happiness is sharing moments with eachother. For them, life in alienation leads to depression, nonetheless, one is having money profusely. Furthermore, for some parents raising their children with moral ethics and family values is happiness.
In my opinion, money cannot do everything. For instance, money can buy a dog, but not the wag of its tail. Similarly, money can buy books, but not the knowledge. Ergo, money is not the only driving factor for achieving happiness.
In conclusion, the definition of happiness varies with person and it is a subjective topic. However, linking contentment with only money would be unwise; many factors play a vital role in becoming happy.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, nonetheless, second, secondly, similarly, so, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18397626113 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82987746462 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575667655786 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.825201249 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9473684211 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7368421053 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84210526316 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355158292958 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107660214446 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481991755552 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164896239037 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606682317145 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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