Many people believe that in order to have clean and tidy streets in their neighbourhood, this should be the residents’ responsibility, while others think it should be the government’s duty. What is your opinion?
It is imperative that our surroundings should be clean and tidy. Some people believe that it is the responsibility of the citizens to ensure that the streets are kept tidy; however, few others believe that the government has to keep the society clean. In my opinion, it is the responsibility of both to ascertain that the neighbourhood is kept clean.
On the one hand, it is significant that the government provides a robust infrastructure for waste management. The government has to build waste collection boxes in each street so that people can conveniently dump their wastes. Consequently, they should build a team in collecting these rubbish from every streets regularly so that the waste does not get accumulated. For example, the government of India initiated scheme named Swach Bharat, in this scheme every road had trash cans installed and there a significant amount of waste found on the roads after the implementation of this program. Also, there must be a law for punishing individuals who do not follow the rules. People should be strictly adviced not to dump any waste on vacant lands, and if any individual breaks the law has to be punished severely so that others do not repeat it.
On the other hand, people play a vital role in keeping the streets clean. It is essential that we live in a clean and neat environment. Today, there are various diseases that are spread because of dumping trash on roads. For example, in a recent survey by WHO it was found that a particular slum in Kochi had the highest number of dengue patients. And when the slum was visited, it was found that because of the huge pile of food waste, the mosquitoes numbers grew and lead to many people falling sick.
To conclude, both the government and people has an equal responsibility to ensure that our neighbourhood is kept clean. If the proper infrastructure is built, most of the waste management problems will be under control.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 442, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'mosquitoes'' or 'mosquito's'?
Suggestion: mosquitoes'; mosquito's
...use of the huge pile of food waste, the mosquitoes numbers grew and lead to many people fa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, so, as to, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85151515152 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84643543296 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50303030303 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.861549168 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0625 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259271478128 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832365909516 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591475822236 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154906182923 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650258169229 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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