Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting.
Write an essay expressing your point of view.
Give reasons for your answers and provide relevant example and experience you might have.
There is no doubt that mothers’ know what is best to their children when it comes to their growth and development, whilst others think that fathers are just as equal when it comes to parenting. This essay will agree that parents play a vital role in upbringing their children. This essay will discuss both points of views.
There are certain good points why mothers tend to be of great importance in raising their children. It is undeniable that they spent more time with their children. This is because, one is by instinct and another is like in many countries they are usually less engaged in working. Moreover, mothers are our first teacher. It is through them that we start to learn new things in such a way that they will always provide all our needs, resulting for us to cope up with our difficulties because of the understanding that they are providing.
On the other hand, many believe that fathers are just as the same as mothers when it comes to parenting. Fathers are usually the more serious one, making their children to have discipline in life. Aside from that, fathers are also the decision maker of the family, that if this trait is influenced to their children, they will become more responsible and independent in the future.
To summarize the above, parents, the mother and the father are equally responsible in nurturing and developing their children. While they have their own ways, whatever it has to be done, it will always be their children who will get benefitted.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, while, as to, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81467181467 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51110145283 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544401544402 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3683193926 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9230769231 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154056055747 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658013821208 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408982803114 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100236092904 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278457364617 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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