Many people only watch sports programs on TV rather than participate in sports. Is it good or bad?
In contemporary settings, the vast majority of people are keen on viewing televised sports competitions but they rarely partake in sports activities. While they can reap some benefits from appreciating such programs, this is relatively detrimental to them in the long term.
People enjoy watching sports events on television for various reasons. To start with, most people have a natural interest in events that test the stamina and endurance of the human body. Also, many people have stressful jobs; watching their favourite team playing and winning allows them to forget their worries for a while. Patriotic feelings could be another reason to watch sports matches on TV. People are curious to know whether their national teams can win at the international level and hence they watch the live events on television.
However, this generates some serious problems. To commence with, most people lack strong self-control, so it becomes a norm for them to spend most of their leisure time in appreciating sports events on televisions by sacrificing their precious time which should have been allocated to workout. This sedentary lifestyle is seriously taking a toll on their health, and this can be evidenced by the fact that more and more of these viewers are suffering from diseases such as obesity and high blood pressure. Conversely, if they participate in sports activities regularly, their health can be better maintained, as doing exercise can burn their calories and avoid the saturation of fat. Furthermore, playing a sport or working out also provides the same level of relaxation by triggering the release of a feel good hormone.
In conclusion, while getting involved in watching sports programs is beneficial to viewers to some extent, playing the sport is even better as it makes them physically active. Hence, in my opinion, only watching sports matches without playing it is bad.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: WORRY_FOR[1]
Message: The verb 'worry' does not normally take the preposition 'for'. Did you mean 'worries about'?
Suggestion: worries about
...and winning allows them to forget their worries for a while. Patriotic feelings could be an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2393442623 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73339997253 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586885245902 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5087991399 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.142857143 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301531217705 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109918950415 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858623468548 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188802788968 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761131740919 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.