A lot of people choose to use their earnings rather than saving it. There are a variety of reasons for doing this and I believe all of it are advantageous. In this essay, I will vividly explain how spending money tends to be positive than saving.
Firstly, it is a common behavior for any individual to spend time for themselves. Such behavior usually manifests after payday. A lot of research states that people want to unwind themselves to get rid of the toxicity their jobs secretes. For example, customer service personnel who works in graveyard shifts would spend most of their money trying to socialize with their love ones, in order to catch up with all of the significant events they had missed during daylights. Thus, spending your money to reward yourself and to spend time with your family merits social development.
Moreover, people are now wise and understand that no one knows what the future may hold, sickness may strike or even a tragedy will happen after an hour or so. People who are not prepared on this disastrous event in life might face consequences which leads to negative impact in terms of finances. For example, people now are educated and prepared themselves against any life-threatening sickness, such as cancer or stage 2 diabetes. With this, spending money to secure the future promotes positiveness.
To conclude, I strongly believe that spending money is not a bad thing. People nowadays are smart enough to use their hard-earned wages to spend quality time with their loveones and to secure their future through life insurance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, thus, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97718631179 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63982951175 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600760456274 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8535179864 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263707718281 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089688018728 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546911799679 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163294510343 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717543133514 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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