many people prefer to spend money and not save it. what are the reasons ? is this a positive or negative development ?
One of the fascinating things about humans is the diversity, not only the color or skin but the personality and way of living. Many people prefer to spend money as it comes, or like what people say “money burns a hole in their pocket”. The reasons behind this phenomenon and why this is a negative development will be discussed in the following.
To begin with the reasons behind not caring about saving money, some people think they always have enough money in order to what they say” keep the wolf away from the door”. The economy will collapse if people think otherwise and start being frugal. Thus, in order to boost the economy, not only does the government spreads such belief among citizens, but it introduces facilities such as credit cards to encourage people to spend more money. Moreover, no matter what kind of walk of life one has, the death will find all people. In other words, the death is an inevitable matter that anyone might face at any moment, which makes some people believe caring about the unpredictable future and saving money is just a waste of the precious life. This can be illustrated simply by the adventurers and the gypsies, who do not care about the future, has no plan to save money, live at the moment to the full.
Regarding why this is a negative development, firstly, it leads to being a labor for the rest of life. One might die at any moment, however, he might live a hundred years, too. By not saving money for when one becomes an old person, he is forced to always work in order to earn some money to make a living. Secondly, one will not find prosperity without having a saving. The prosperity is reachable simply by improving the quality of life through acts such as buying a bigger house, a better car or making a family. These actions cost a fortune, and as a result, are far-fetched without planning years ahead for how to save money for them.
To sum up, the policy of the government and the fact that no one can predict the future has made some people spend what they earn without saving a coin. This is a negative development inasmuch as It leads to needing to work forever and not reaching happiness in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, kind of, such as, as a result, in other words, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60358056266 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44528564861 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511508951407 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4025725092 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.882352941 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05882352941 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332603397115 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964722397263 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835805625714 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224797858375 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0955330322412 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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