Due to the new technologies and the internet, radio is going to disappear in a few years. do you agree or disagree with the statement ?
Communication is one of key elements of societies. While radio used to be main vessel of getting the news, the internet and new technologies are the new trend and making the radio go obsolete. Reasons behind this matter will be discussed in the following.
To begin with, it can be said that it is in the nature of any advancement to put old technologies into obsolescence. In other words, it cannot be called progress and invention if it is not better in every aspect than what was used before and thus, the next best thing replaces the old, as does the internet to the radio.
In addition to what was said, the global village and its consequences, such as vast amount of news everyday, has made it impossible for the radio to keep up. On the other hand, one can use the internet at any place to get notified about that is happening at any corner of the world, from stock market changes in China to latest results of soccer matches in Brazil.
Granted what was said, there are some specifications the radio that make it irreplaceable. The radio is still the best thing one can listen to while driving. The fun, joy, personal connection to RJ and the surprise element of radio programs are the things that cannot be found in other media. Jerry Seinfeld, the popular comedian of 80s, has started a talk show in the radio recently instead of the internet or other new technologies due to its popularity, specially between truck drivers.
To sum up, I personally believe that the radio will vanish at the end due to what was said. What used to be a trend will eventually become an antique that can only be found in museums.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...nsequences, such as vast amount of news everyday, has made it impossible for the radio t...
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Line 5, column 319, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the latest'.
Suggestion: to the latest
...rld, from stock market changes in China to latest results of soccer matches in Brazil. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, thus, while, in addition, such as, in other words, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57337883959 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57126863263 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549488054608 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3590245862 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.076923077 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168989284293 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622289124989 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693205979123 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100730164883 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553327879275 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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