Do the advantages of having English as a global language outweigh the disadvantages

Essay topics:

Do the advantages of having English as a global language outweigh the disadvantages?

Worldwide communication is the key to humanity’s advancement, and one of the things that ease up the process is to have a global language. Not long ago, England was the most powerful country in the world ruling many other countries. As a result, English has become the universal language. While some oppose with such matter, others are fond of this due to its advantages. I stand with the second group due to several reasons which will be discussed.

To begin with, having a worldwide language is a necessity nowadays because of globalization. Technological advancements, advanced communication tools and global village are useless and without any advantages if there was not a language spoken by the whole world. As a result of old british empire, English already is a global language. Establishing a new one is not only absurd but a waste of resources.

Moreover, speaking English will help a country and nation to grow. Knowing how to speak a language spoken by the whole world will make the communication with other people easier. Not only will this eventually help the country to attract tourists or international companies, but also this will help the country’s scientists to better communicate with other countries’ scientists. Thus, science and economy of the country will advance at a faster pace. For instance, in India English is taught at schools and therefore the whole country knows how to speak. Nowadays this country is one of the main tourists’ attractions worldwide as well as one of the leading countries in many aspects, such as sciences like IT.
Granted what was said, it must be acknowledged that there are some disadvantages in having English spoken by all. Although that will help the whole world, it must be taken into account that English as a global language is the souvenir of the era in which England ruled the world and took advantage of poor countries. So opposing with this language, as a result of history and patriotism, is only logical.
To sum up, having English as an international language will benefit all of the world. What really matters is now and progress and one should not be stacked in the past.

Votes
Average: 8.8 (3 votes)

Comments

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, really, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99723756906 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96877541823 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508287292818 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4960672419 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.45 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199354238335 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669285041775 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706896551287 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143545451094 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796180923216 0.056905535591 140% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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