Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree ?
What people choose to wear is influenced by many factors such as time of the year or their neighborhood. Some people believe a lot about one’s culture and character might be deducted from the clothes he chooses to wear. I oppose this belief due to several reasons which will be discussed in the following.
To begin with, one is not free to purchase any clothing he wishes to buy owing to the burdens which limit his options. If one does not want to face poverty, he must consider how much he earns and how much what he wants to buy costs. As a result, his outlook might have nothing to do with his personality or traditions.
Moreover, what citizens wear is actually chosen by others other than themselves. The fashion industry is a powerful and successful business nowadays, which wishes to stay that way. As a result, a pile load of money is invested in advertisements so that not only do people buy more clothes, but they select a product with the most profit for the company. Therefore, it is the managers and shareholders of the fashion companies that choose what people buy. This matter can simply be exemplified by the fact that companies like Nike or Adidas spend a fortune every year to influence people’s taste in clothes, from advertisements on televisions to contracts with celebrities.
Granted what was said, it must be taken into account that people are more educated these days. Thus, their salary is more than what used to be in the past as well as the fact that they are less affected by ads. So, how they dress up reveals their taste in fashion and their characters and culture, as well.
To sum up, even though people are more educated, a little knowledge can be obtained from their choice of clothes. Their choices are influenced by their income and big companies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: BUY_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'by'?
Suggestion: by
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7246835443 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62258159554 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569620253165 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7890417618 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3125 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216939685195 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703488833602 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762733773357 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125540633986 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703182480577 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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