some people consider price as the most important thing to consider when buying a product or a service . do you agree or disagree ?
There are many criteria which people consider when buying stuff. Some people believe that the price is the most important matter to customers when selecting products or services. I totally disagree with this belief due to several reasons which will be discussed in the following.
To begin with, there are many criteria when acquiring a product or service that make the money go out of the picture. Many products or services are popular and sold well although being so expensive. Firstly, the pivotal aim of any purchase is to meet a need, and usually there are not many choices available that can handle a special problem. For instance, one will be forced to spend a fortune and undergo a surgery if he suffers from a heart disease. Secondly, the prices are based on the materials used in a product, and as it happens the better the materials the higher the price. The quality is by far the most crucial properties to look for in a product for all people. Thus, not only are high-quality products wanted more, but they are costly, too. This matter can be exemplified by iPhones that can empty bank accounts when buying and still people go crazy for them when the new version is introduced.
Moreover, in the 21st century, the rate of poverty and unemployment has decreased. The new generation is educated as well as being well paid. Therefore, the money is not as important as it used to be in the eyes of the community. Nowadays, people buy whatever they adore without caring about the price’s tag.
Granted what was said, it must be taken into account that one might face financial crises in his lifetime. In these periods, the budget is limited and every penny must be spent wisely. As a result, the cost of any purchase becomes the most significant factor.
To sum up, even though the money matters, people do not base their buying on that. In this era, the incomes are more than the past, and specifics such as the quality or the purpose are the outstanding features being searched for.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7264957265 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46240224372 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57264957265 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0075915253 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.95 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.55 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267741627856 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727154470233 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858227414052 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137626991009 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11402634582 0.056905535591 200% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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