Many people say that cooking and eating at home is better for the individual and the family than eating out in restaurants or canteens.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer & include any relevant examples?
Nowadays, people preferring to eat outside are gradually increasing. There are still many people who think that eating home cooked food is better compared to dine-out. I completely agree with this statement, and in this essay I will explain reasons for my views with examples.
First and foremost reason for preferring home cooked food is due to the usage of quality ingredients while cooking. These days, quite a lot of eateries are not adhering to the quality standards laid by the concerned government departments. For example, in the city where I live, the sting operation conducted by local media agency on the top restaurants revealed a shocking fact that, majority of them are using low graded cooking oil in their best selling dishes. As a result, people who dine-out frequently at these restaurants are having high risk of suffering from chronic disorders at their early ages.
Furthermore, I too support the view of an individual and the family having a home cooked meal rather than eating outside. The reason for this is the amount of nutritional benefits associated with the food cooked at home. To illustrate this, a recent study portrayed that, kids who are feed with the home cooked food are seemed to be grown mentally and physically stronger to the kids who are feed on irregular diet. Secondly, eating fast food in adults leads to become fatigued. As a consequence, these people will be sleep deprived and overtired, which disturbs their normal day-to-day activities.
In conclusion, although eating outside has variety of problems, these can be overcome with the healthy lifestyle. Personally, I feel one should restrict dining outside in order to maintain good health.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1155234657 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70173134596 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617328519856 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3635865973 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.214285714 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274465289288 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09327983793 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720038430109 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158115949645 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796567553989 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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