Many people think it is important to spend a lot of money on a large wedding celebration. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your opinion and give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge and experience.
It is important to consider how much intending couples spend on their wedding. Well if you think it is necessary to spend heavily, oldest opine that excessive spending should be minimal on such days this essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of excessive spending on weddings and express my opinion, which disagrees with lavish spending on parties.
One of the advantages of extravagant spending at receptions, is to showcase the world and success of either or both families. For example, often believe that the family of the spouse has to know their worth, to this end a certain level of opulence must be displayed at such occasions. To further illustrate, tweet on the day are often very expensive and cost a fortune, which create an avenue for the society to know the families and reckoned with them in the society. Occasionally this leads to the receipt of valuables and very expensive gifts. However the amount of money spent is not always be covered by the bride or groom most times.
On the contrary, impacts of lavish wedding receptions far outweighs the benefits. Couples are left with little or nothing after such expenses, consequently, many of whom do not have the funds to go on honeymoon after their make it out. For instance, a publication detailed account of young couples in Nigeria who threw very expensive parties at their weddings, who could not make ends meet as a result of such expenses. Furthermore, they were ejected from the apartment as they could not pay the rent after expiration, it is because the couple had no savings as it has all been spent on the big day.
In conclusion, although lavish spending or nipple parties have perceived benefits such as respect in the society and received of expensive gifts, the drawbacks outweighs the benefits as couples spend their savings to throw such parties, not being able to meet their financial obligations. In my opinion, I believe it is not wise to spend heavily on such occasions, as there is a lifetime of expenses after the wedding day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87861271676 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63641485426 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540462427746 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.5449974558 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.846153846 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6153846154 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6153846154 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0928166716322 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348757464195 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028402674997 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0625313830728 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332211134049 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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