Many people think it is important to spend a lot of money on a large wedding celebration. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your opinion and give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge and experience.
It is important to consider how much couples spend on their wedding days. While few think it is necessary to spend heavily, others opine that excessive spending should be minimal on such days. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of excessive spending on weddings days and express my personal opinion, which disagrees with lavish spending on parties.
On the one hand, an advantages of spending a lot of money on a large wedding celebration, is to showcase to the world the success of either or both families. For example, Nigerian parents often believe that the family of the spouse has to know their worth, to this end, a certain level of opulence must be displayed at such occasions. To further illustrate, the outfits of the day are often very expensive and cost a fortune, which create an avenue for the society to know the families and reckon with them. Occasionally, this leads to the receipt of valuables and very expensive gifts. However, the amount of money spent is not always be covered by the bride or groom most times.
On the other hand, the drawbacks of spending a lot of money on a large wedding celebration far outweighs the benefits. To illustrate, such extravagance leaves couples with little or nothing after incurring such expenses, consequently, many do not have the funds to go on honeymoon after their nuptials. For instance, a publication detailed the account of young couples in Nigeria who threw very expensive parties at their weddings, who could not make ends meet as a result of such costs. Furthermore, they were ejected from the apartment as they could not pay the rent after expiration, this is because the couple had no savings as it has all been spent on the big day.
In conclusion, although large wedding celebrations have perceived benefits such as respect in the society and received of expensive gifts, the drawbacks outweighs the benefits as couples spend their savings to throw such parties, not being able to meet their financial obligations. In my opinion, I believe it is not wise to spend heavily on such occasions, as there is a lifetime of expenses after the wedding day.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
It is important to consider how much couples spend on their wedding days. Wh...
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Line 1, column 299, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an advantage' or simply 'advantages'?
Suggestion: an advantage; advantages
...pending on parties. On the one hand, an advantages of spending a lot of money on a large w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8956043956 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68316456009 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519230769231 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.5716226704 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.285714286 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141120477705 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589684426722 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05336515769 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922596811782 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274004207073 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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