Many people think that public celebrations (like National Holidays, festivals etc) are a waste of money and that is the government should spend those funds in a better way. Do you agree or disagree?
It is generally said that allocating public founds to holding celebrations, from traditional holidays to festivals, can be wastefulness, while it could be spend on some significant programmes. I firmly believe that it is better to be assigned to health centers and education system.
The most important requirement of every society is providing health centres. Building these clinics, people from all walks of life would sweep away their worry regarding some serious illnesses. Take South Africa into consideration; each year a large amount of money is spent on traditional celebrations; however, many people are threatened by some acute diseases such as HIV. If government of Africa had made a wise decision and erected more hospitals, the number of death tolls would probably reduce.
Another possible investment can be estabilishing educational centres. This is because erecting schools, language Institutes, and research organisations come with a staggering cost. Such a great deal of money could not be affordable except by the government, whereas numerous donations can be assigned to the celebrations by people.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that the lion share of public money ought to be first allocated to education centres and health services, and then celebrations.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, regarding, so, then, whereas, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 199.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49748743719 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12307413953 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688442211055 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.974260213 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.4 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0903845441847 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313920511208 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0240672279043 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.052463629373 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0126636624494 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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