Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to?
The place, where the human spends his first years, plays a major role in his future and it contributes significantly in his success. Some people believe that the native region helps individual to become successful person, while others argue that the success of the person depends mainly on the personality of human and not on his origin. This essay will discuss how the native regions affect on significantly on human success and on his accomplishments.
The place of origin has a significant impact on human success because it makes human to become more motivate and more passion. Living in difficult regions teaches human to become more tough and more undependable. Recent research, which was conducted in the Cambridge university, has shown that 90% of American people have been affected positively by their original regions, and they express more motivation and more creativity. Therefore, it seems clear that the place of origin is very crucial in the success of the individual.
On the other hand, some people think that there is no relation between the native regions and the success of person. They support their view through providing a lot of examples of people who traveled to another country, where they adapt easily without any difficulties. But these people are unaware of the fact that the number of these people is very small and should not express this issue as a general rule, it is just a unique case. Thus, the place, where individual grew up, is very important and affects on person accomplishments.
In conclusion, this essay discussed how the environment at which the human lives his childhood affects on human future life. In my opinion, I am inclined to believe that human future success depends on his native region.
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but, first, if, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05517241379 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69610191151 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520689655172 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9513427316 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.769230769 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263580329192 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111590170996 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976178167153 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168636586309 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557593497263 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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