Many People like to wear fashionable clothes.
Why do you think this is the case?
Is this good thing or a bad thing?
Designer clothes are fashion statements in today's world. Majority of the population, love to wear fashionable outfits. This essay will discuss few of the negative impact it has on the society.
Firstly, the fashion clothes are considered as style statement. Many popular brands like, ADD, Mango, Levis and few others, comes with an enormous price tag. People who cannot afford it, are considered from middle or lower income group Because these days designer clothes are entry ticket to the élite class of society, which leads to discrimination within the society.
Secondly, in young generation, if anyone is wearing a non-branded clothes are tagged as old-fashioned or outdated. Thus, fashionable attire might lead to problems like ego, increase in cost of living and so on. Furthermore, the growing interest of youth in designer clothes have increased the pressure on parents, to buy costly dresses for their children in every occasions.
Clothes definitely are an important part of today's world. Based on the outfits people can identify the occasion it is worn for. For example, if someone if wearing white gown, it is linked to marriage function while if somebody is wearing black it would be related to some sad event. Hence, clothes are part of the lifestyle however, it should not be the key factor to discriminate people.
This essay discussed the importance of clothing in everyday lifestyle. In my opinion, I believe that wearing fashionable clothes in all situation increase inequality within the society. To support this view, schools are the best examples; during the school days, all students were instructed to wear school uniform which always signified that, all students are equal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 153, Rule ID: IF_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...it is worn for. For example, if someone if wearing white gown, it is linked to mar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27838827839 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68060299902 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641025641026 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.0013297684 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0625 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147858259761 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506254939293 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030690178017 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849085707943 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331623161629 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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