Many People like to wear fashionable clothes.Why do you think this is the caseIs this a good thing or bad thing

Essay topics:

Many People like to wear fashionable clothes.
Why do you think this is the case
Is this a good thing or bad thing

Nowadays the trend in wearing clothes is quite changing and people are adpating various fashionable clothes.
In the modern age the taste of people in choosing clothes is quite advancing than in past generations. People in current age tend to look for various designs in the garments they choose which gives them a different look. People tend to follow their favorite fashion icon and choose similar trend while wearing clothes. They want to be look very fashionable and stylish. Besides, the tendency to look unique in the crowd and attract others very easily people choose various fashionable designs in the apparels. Also people tend to get bore with the same type of clothes and look for new ones.

For example, many celebrites wear different costumes in the movie they act and people tend to follow them. As a result they look for those apprales. They want to get noticed even in huge crowd by large number of people. People look for the trending patterns in different regions or different people and which is anything of their interst they choose it.

I beleive people wearing fashionable clothes is a good thing. As this gives them the flexibilty to adapt into the dressing of their choice and make themselves comfortable. It also gives them good knowledge in clothing types and trends. Though contrary to this it can be a bad thing if people in the view to be fashionable try to get the fashionable clothes which they can't afford and may lead them to debts. So people have to choose as per thier budget and be fashinable in that limits.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 394, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le and stylish. Besides, the tendency to look unique in the crowd and attract oth...
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Line 2, column 511, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...us fashionable designs in the apparels. Also people tend to get bore with the same t...
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Line 6, column 369, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... get the fashionable clothes which they cant afford and may lead them to debts. So p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, may, so, while, for example, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79850746269 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42017813321 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492537313433 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9999425551 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.375 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217038037688 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841343816146 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879123689905 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14620289364 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744058942556 0.056905535591 131% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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