Major section of the workforce allocates more time to their jobs which results in less time for recreational activities. In this essay I will discuss that this habit has more drawbacks than benefits as it can impact employee’s health negatively and take away their social life from them.
First of all, being a workaholic would definitely impact one’s well-being. Human’s body require rest and relaxation to be able to continue working properly. When one is working for long hours and do not provide this rest to its body in the form of sleep or any other kinds such as hanging out with friend or simply reading a nice book, his health would be affected seriously. According to American Health Institution, individuals working more than 60 hours a week would be more prone to be stung by mental or physical disease other than those who work normally a 40-hour job and devote time to relaxing as well.
In addition, when one is always working, he would not have much of a free time to spend with friends or family and as time passes, he would lose his support group. Every relationship needs to be taken care of from both sides. As workhorses are always occupied with their careers, surely, they would not be able to give the care needed in a relationship. A CEO once was writing in his life story book that his ambitious in workplace left him no one in his 40s and resulted in im being depressed severely.
In a nutshell, being a career-focused individual, which leaves one a little time for their hobbies will result in harming their health and jeopardizing their social life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, well, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79061371841 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68925203897 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599277978339 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.9911890384 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.636363636 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172446212403 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642941440514 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634360092052 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112042736612 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641041345583 0.056905535591 113% => OK
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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