Lack of enough physical activity for working force has become a debatable issue nowadays. In my opinion, heavy workload is a reason for this matter. Companies and other workplaces must provide fitness programs for their employees to address this problem.
Competition in the workplaces is very intense. There are many rivals who are waiting to take your position in the company. Therefore, employees work really and to ensure their job safety and not losing their job. They work overtime to meet the deadlines. This pressure results in employees become like a machine and sacrifice other parts of their life to go ahead in their work and cope with the pressure. Weak Wok-life balance is the reason of not having enough time to spend in a gym.
To conquer this situation, workplaces help can provide employees promotion in nearby fitness facilities. Monthly gym membership is also another option to encourage employees to work out more. It is vital that companies emphasize on the benefits of workout and side effects of low physical activity. Furthermore, they must ban overtime working. For example, nestle company ban working more thann40 hours per week so that employees can enjoy their weekend and do not focus on the job very much.
In a nutshell, pressure in the workplace and heavy workload result in the fact that employees do not have time to work out. Companies can help address this problem by providing fitness programs and encourage employees to workout.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, really, so, therefore, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08641975309 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57144685051 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559670781893 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3746983577 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.25 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1875 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222933957736 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725671343867 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473157821211 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150494900843 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416425855191 0.056905535591 73% => OK
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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