In many places shopping is becoming a free-time activity, replacing the traditional hobbies of the past. Discuss the reasons for the development. Is this development positive or negative?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example for your own knowledge or experience.
Shopping means buying goods of daily requirement as well as things that one need but nowadays, it has become a spare-time activity in various locations and overcome the custom hobbies of previous times. There are plethora of reasons for this change and In my opinion, I believe that increase in this trend has bad impact.
The predominant reason for advancement of leisure-time activity that is shopping is due to development of technology, lady's most of the work has been done by machines for example, use of washing machine, dish washer, vacum cleaner and list goes on. So, on weekends they get bored while sitting at home and preferred to go for shopping to change their mood. Moreover, Today's lifestyle is very busy and hectic, so people go for window shopping in order to relieve their stress.
On the other hand, doing shopping in excess has negative effects because whenever, individuals go out for shopping, they buy things which attract their eyes although those goods are not useful for them. So, this lead to wastage of money. Beside that in ancient times, our ancestors had skills to make different things by their own for illustration, stitched their own clothes, made pots for decoration, turned waste material to useful things like pen stand etcetera. But now, such skills get vanished due to increase in shopping and individuals do not remain in touch with their roots.
In conclusion, I would like to say that shopping has both merits and demerits. People should prepare a list of things they need before going for shopping so that they could buy goods that they want. In addition to it, they should learn skills and make them as their hobbies so that they can make things which they required by their own such as paintings to decorate their houses. Well, It all depends on individuals, how they can save their money as well as time.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84905660377 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45761507167 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572327044025 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0109744057 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.615384615 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205231473318 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816011932099 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575300978633 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14559684129 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579347057658 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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