Many small, local shops are closing as they are unable to compete with large supermarkets in the area. How does this effect local community? How could this situation be improved?
These days, Many small businesses are getting out of business as they are unable to compete with large super markets.Local shopkeepers take big loans from banks to set up their business but unfortunately do not earn much profit as large supermarkets thus become bankrupts, which further demands closing of business. In this essay, I will examine various affects of this scenario. Further I will suggest some solutions to improve this situation.
This scenario effects the local community adversely. One of the major negative impact is that there is ' Increase in Income Gap'. Rich men's are becoming richer while the poor people are becoming more poor. This huge gap in income further leads to many social evils like discrimination, social crimes.
Another negative effect of large supermarkets swallowing small local shops is that it leads to unemployment. Although, these small markets do not employ large number of staff, but if taken collectively it is a big number of people including helpers, cleaners, wait staff and so on. For an instance, students prefer to work in local shops because of less burden but when these shops get out of business, it left these students unemployed as large supermarkets employ experienced staff.
However, there are many preventive measure that could be taken to improve this situation. First of all the local government should provide tax rebate to small businessmen's. This will not increase their profit income but also encourage them to trade their products at cheaper rate thus alluring more customers. For an example, people prefer to buy from army canteens as the products sold there are free from state taxes thus offer great benefits to buyers. Same way if the local shopkeepers sell their goods and services in cheaper prices than they would definitely grow and compete with large supermarkets.
Another significant measure that could make small businessmen compatible to large supermarkets is advertising. Through local advertisements, there small shops could remark their presence in the community. Also, these shopkeepers should offer coupons and discounts via online marketing which would attract more customers thus, would expand their sales.
In conclusion, There would be numerous negative impacts of small business being swallowed by large business such as income gap and unemployment. Fortunately, preventive actions such as government assistance in terms of tax rebate and decent advertisements by the shopkeepers would reduce this problem largely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, thus, while, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2132.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45268542199 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80604272234 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544757033248 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7167480695 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.6 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.55 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335877541697 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105710433784 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832675077575 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160101400994 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417323586932 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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