Many sports players advertise sports-related products. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
It is a fact that most of the star athletes advertise diverse sports-related products. There are a couple of advantages such as job creation and encouragement to youths, but there are also drawbacks to be taken into consideration.
Firstly, one benefit of sports star advertising vivid products related to their profession is it helps to create jobs. In other words, many people buy products that are endorsed by renowned sports personality which helps to increase sales; thereby, creating employment. For example, according to a recent survey in western India by the famous retail chain, most of the youths and teenagers purchase the similar brand and colour that has been advertised at Television by their favourite sports star. Secondly, sportspeople advertising sports-related products are advantageous because it encourages individuals to indulge in active lifestyle. To be precise, sports personalities endorse their products by exposing their different skills and qualities, which encourages young people to imitate them.
On the other hand, one problem with sports star in advertising various sports brand is that sometimes athletes become so much involved in such adverts that their attention is diverted from their game. This is because sports star starts giving more priority to such advertisements rather than practising or attending important sessions of their game. Another issue is that children, in order to purchase the same product, put undue pressure on their parents. Adolescents are unaware of the true face of advertisements and force their parents to owe the advertised product. For example, recently there was an article in Times of India mentioned that a couple in northern India was under too much stress and have to work over-time in order to satisfy their child's wish to purchase the similar product that was advertised by Virat Kholi, a renowned Indian cricketer.
In conclusion, while individuals can benefit from sports personality advertising sports-related products, it can also lead to disturbance in sports player's profession and forceful pressure on parents by their child.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53680981595 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98105381489 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552147239264 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.9901551167 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.846153846 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334944868152 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139029224246 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101247869018 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238698974194 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065750830469 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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