Many sports players advertise sports-related products. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Advertisement has become a prominent platform for every business. Now days, sport personalities are being featured to promote a product. Some considering this practice to be practical while others deride it asserting that few drawbacks need to be taken into consideration.
There are several benefits of featuring sports players for sports products. First, popularity and fame are the crucial reasons for dramatic increase in sale. People follow the celebrities and eagerly wants to know everything about them. Eventually, it has a positive impact on sales and automatically generates employment. For example, Boost energy drink is endorsed by Ms dhoni, which has helped the company to rise its sale by 30% and employment by 32%. Somehow, celebrities are contributing for a good cause which is associated with less criminal activities as unemployment is a principle reason for such activities. Next, it helps children to become more active and energetic. In this artificial world, children are being fragile to any physical movement. Mostly every advertisement carries sports activities and energetic performances by sports players. Thus, by seeing them performing, they highly get motivated to do the same and maintain fitness.
On the contrary, there are some negative aspects to be considered. Excessive prices of products due to endorsement by celebrities. They charge very high for their appearance in the aids which is ultimately be extracted from increasing the price of a product. Also, it creates unnecessary pressure on parents. Many times, parents are forced by their children to purchase extravagant products which seems to be worthless. They need to deviate from their planned budgets and force themselves to fulfill needs of their children and claimed to add extra money in the budget.
In conclusion, featuring sports personalities is a positive development with immense benefits. However, it created futile pressure on parents for buying expensive products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59405940594 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03431560688 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627062706271 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7980769197 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7142857143 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4285714286 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163295944397 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502990250016 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913489482424 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985612836518 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539137667555 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.55 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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