Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines.
Does this development bring more advantages than disadvantages?
It is common knowledge that automatics plays key role in every aspect of the new world. The question, however, arises how we going to spend our time when machines take care of our work. totally. this essay will attempt to discuss both sides of the argument and provide relevant examples.
First and foremost, it is often claimed that machines can do several tasks together in the same time without making any mistake. Usually, machines can perform tasks fastest and faultlessly than humans. For example, computer can analyse a massive amount of data in a single second. Moreover, it will be good help for example for aged people who are living alone. They will be able to live independently with the help of robot machines. thus, there is no denying that machines have its place in the world.
On the other hand, however, it is also argued that nobody can predict how the machines and artificial intelligence will evolve. For instance, in the future machine can stand against the human population. we can see plenty of movie with this scenario. Besides, I believe that machines will also create a massive unemployment. when machines will be used for large-scale production in factories, many human labors will be eliminated from those jobs. thus, we can see that we must keep an eye on the machines and especially on the artificial intelligence, because it may bring catastrophic results.
From the arguments I have presented above it can be seen that both arguments definitively have their supporters and opponents. it is my view though that only machines can make our life easier and give us more time to spend on what we really want to. we cannot forget that machines can overtake the power and try to make our life happy but their way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, really, second, so, thus, for example, for instance, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88963210702 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5590901519 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588628762542 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7311719825 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.2222222222 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6111111111 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10170196687 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0325255013098 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040195809129 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0582544321265 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308176981326 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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