Many working people get little or no exercise during the workday or in their free time and have health problems as a result.
Why do many people do not get enough exercise?
What can be done about this problem?
More and more people in the workforce are not exercising enough during the workday, and are becoming physically unfit. this is as a result of the hectic nature of some jobs experienced by workers. The solution to this must be that organizations must give more free days at the office.
One of the significant causes of this problem is the busy schedule registered by many at work.
this simply means that people are constantly working for long hours each day at the office.
Consequently, people do not have the opportunity to go to fitness centres. this will eventually lead to so many people having health issues. For example, the Vanguard Newspaper reported that 70% of the working population in India are suffering from stress due to the long hours spent at their duty post and the inability to go for workout sessions.
Thus, being too occupied in an establishment can lead to not having the chance to go to the gym.
However, a good solution to this problem will be that private companies should be flexible enough to reduce the hours spent at the office. In other words, employers must create free sessions at work so that employees can exercise more. To illustrate, in 2000, 50 out of 60 industries in the US cut back the number of working hours from eight hours to six hours, and
this has helped workers to have more time to keep fit.
Hence, managers are encouraged to slash the number of working hours to give time for other activities.
To sum up, many people can not perform exercises regularly because of the little time spent outside of work. company leaders must, therefore, consider reducing the hours spent working. If this is done, then there will be more healthy people in the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, as a result, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84899328859 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51333321226 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53355704698 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2155501683 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3125 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330624694302 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112231645849 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689513496208 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13354704505 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583392661503 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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