Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problem as a result.
Why do many working people not get enough exercise?
What can be done about this problem?
Nowadays most workers have to cope with many different issues in their daily life which health could be one the most important and also costly issues among them. Many workers have an unhealthy lifestyle without any routine exercises which can cause many problems for their healthiness.
Because of economic crisis, Many companies are now facing serious issues for paying salaries and supplying different benefits for their employees. So they are being forced to cut their company headcount. As a result, employers will ask their remained workers to work harder in order to compensate the lack of workforce. On the other hand, inflation is very high in most countries around the world, and cost of living is increasing day by day. So people ought to work in two or three shifts to gain more money and finally, to handle their lives more easily. So as a result, employees do not have proper work-life balance, thus they cannot spend enough time or even money on daily exercising.
In my opinion, there are lots of thing to do to help workers solve this issue. First, employers could offer different type of benefits to their employees such as sports club membership cards, and also allocate specific time of their routine work hours to use sport facilities during the working day. Also they could hold various sport activities on weekends and ask employees to participate with their families, such as mountain climbing, bike riding and etc. furthermore, workers should believe that cost of illnesses rise from sedentary lifestyle is much more than doing sport activities. So it’s better to spend some of their money on doing health-related activities to keep their body in a good shape.
In conclusion, being healthy is one the most important issues for each person and could affect the entire life. So keeping a balance between work and life and spending enough time on exercising will help anyone to experience happier life and get rid of their health problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...Nowadays most workers have to cope with many different issues in their daily life which health...
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Line 5, column 26, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of things'.
Suggestion: lots of things
...exercising. In my opinion, there are lots of thing to do to help workers solve this issue....
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Line 5, column 301, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...port facilities during the working day. Also they could hold various sport activitie...
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Line 5, column 452, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
... such as mountain climbing, bike riding and etc. furthermore, workers should believe tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, thus, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03048780488 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50484361246 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573170731707 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.008947867 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299737176232 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919376861857 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644628346859 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174939130762 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279478344934 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.