MEDIA AND ADVERTISING ESSAY
Here is the question: some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some think good, some think this a an disadvantage. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays,there are numerous people believe that it is advantageous for some particular companies finance the sport industry in order to draw the attention of the people and sell their goods. However, i think this is a terrible method to advertise themselves.
On the one hand, there are actually some benefits of advertising by sponsoring sports. In fact, most of the big businessman like "Clear men" or "Romano" which are shower shampoos are doing this because they think adding them into the well-known area like sport could increase their reputation. For example, most of the people are all known "Clear men: because they are usually appeared on the "advertising time" after the football match over which could improve their fame. As a result, this is a smart method to push their renown and sell their products.
On the other hand, being a patron of sports can cause many detrimental outcomes. The reason is because some people take the "advertising time" as a break to take the food or drink. Secondly, people who are obsessed in football can not wait just because the ads which means advertisements are nothing to them. Consequently, the company who sponsor the sport could hardly sell their goods which maybe drives to bankrupt.
In conclusion, supporting sports is not really a smart way to improve the reputation because there are a myriad of drawbacks which is outweigh the rewards
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
Nowadays,there are numerous people believe that it is ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e people and sell their goods. However, i think this is a terrible method to adve...
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Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...e many detrimental outcomes. The reason is because some people take the 'advertising ...
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Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...rove the reputation because there are a myriad of drawbacks which is outweigh the rewa...
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Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'outweighed'.
Suggestion: outweighed
...here are a myriad of drawbacks which is outweigh the rewards
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, consequently, however, may, really, second, secondly, so, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23275862069 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04732539012 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564655172414 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5051148868 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.363636364 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6363636364 7.06120827912 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200914703058 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933692427798 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07397676725 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131475035776 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630672978071 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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