modern technology is changing our world .This has advantages such as bringing people together through communication. it also has disadvantages such as destroying differences between cultures. To what extent agree or disagree
In the era of technological advancement people are becoming closer but importance of traditions are destroyed.this essay agrees with the both the statements.
There are many social networking sites and applications for people to communicate such as Facebook ,Instagram ,Watsapp to name but a few. it has surely played a major role in bringing people together whether they are in the same place or far away. The communication has become very easy and hassle free due to this. When a person wants to talk with their loved ones who lives in a foreign country,modern technology has made it possible. For example,Many children are migrating for studies to other countries, connecting to them is easy for their parents with the help of social media.
On the contrary,Due to globalisation,as people come closer through technology the differences between their culture and tradition have suffered. To whom does it affect? Everyone! The reason behind this is,every country has their own customs and values but in contemporary society the uniqueness is nowhere to see. For instance,Indian population is highly influenced by the western culture.Whether dressing,eating and lifestyle.
While it is good to have broad-minded thinking,preserving our values is also necessary.
All things considered the obvious conclusion is,Even though today communication is easy,traditions are vanishing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1177.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 210.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60476190476 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.50115303327 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1314294844 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0833333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160179801935 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488548438184 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452355193033 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069359323059 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371912244229 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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