It is undoubtedly true that nowadays media is paying more attention to the lives of celebrity than ever before. This may raise the profit of news agencies, but often society faces several negative consequences. In this essay, I will explain few of the reason behind this phenomenon and also illustrates some drawbacks of it.
Psychology most of the people are not strong enough to be self-confident, and want to become popular among others. Consequently, we follow those people who are already popular, and consider them as an ideal for their life. Considering this psychological weakness, the media industry has started to publish the news of popular peoples, in recent days. In addition, information is ubiquitously available and anybody can publish about anything through on-line, and therefore celebrities themselves create more publication to enhance their popularity.
As a result of these publications, we forget who we are in reality, and what is our basic need. The Most significant drawback is that showing a celebrity as a superior makes us feel inferior. To overcome it, we spend money to copy their lifestyle; and as a consequence, we lost most of our valuable saving. For example, we can see how the luxurious travel industries and luxury fashion brands are booming and making profits. Secondly, most of us forget the poor who need our help and support. Instead of spending money for expensive dresses, we forget it is more pleasurable to see a smile on others face. As we are getting more self-centred, our society is getting more fragmented.
In conclusion, the way media industries are using our psychological weakness to make profit is lead to an undesirable society. I believe that news agencies should be responsible to the society and publish more good news, rather stories about celebrities’ life.
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It is undoubtedly true that
It is undoubtedly true that nowadays media is paying more attention to the lives of the celebrity than ever before. This may raise the profit of news agencies, but often society faces several negative consequences. In this essay, I will explain few of the reason behind this phenomenon and also illustrates some drawbacks of it.
Psychology, most of the people, are not strong enough to be self-confident and want to become popular among others. Consequently, we follow those people who are already popular, and consider them as an ideal for their life. Considering this psychological weakness, the media industry has started to publish the news of famous peoples, in recent days. Besides, information is ubiquitously available, and anybody can post about anything through online, and therefore celebrities themselves create more publication to enhance their popularity.
As a result of these publications, we forget who we are in reality, and what is our primary need. The most significant drawback is that showing a celebrity as a superior makes us feel inferior. To overcome it, we spend money to copy their lifestyle; and as a consequence, we lost most of our valuable saving. For example, we can see how the luxurious travel industries and luxury fashion brands are booming and making profits. Secondly, most of us forget the poor who need our help and support. Instead of spending money for expensive dresses, we ignore it is more pleasurable to see a smile on others face. As we are getting more self-centred, our society is getting more fragmented.
In conclusion, the way media industries are using our psychological weakness to make the profit is leading to an undesirable society. I believe that news agencies should be responsible to the community and publish more good news, instead of stories about celebrities’ life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2027027027 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03406969098 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7215507322 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.25 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198382559822 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611459557493 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628512482722 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115884143239 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247101289247 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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