You are a parent and you need information about a school trip your child is going on.
Write a letter to the class teacher. In your letter
• introduce yourself
• explain what information you are looking for
• inform the teacher about any specific needs your child has
I am Somdeep Nandy, father of your student Somdatta Nandy, Class VI, Roll no – 6. Here I am writing regarding the upcoming one-day education trip.
Firstly I would like to get an update whether you are allowing one of the parents to join with the students. Secondly, please let me know whether Somdatta needs to carry any special footwear. Finally please provide the contact number of the tour coordinator, I would like to call if you are late.
Besides, I would also like to inform that Somdatta is under medication. She needs to take two medicines one hour before lunch. It would be great if you kindly inform the lunchtime an hour early.
Thank you very much for your time and kind attention. For any further discussion please contact me at 44558899.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...ta needs to carry any special footwear. Finally please provide the contact number of th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 634.0 937.175257732 68% => OK
No of words: 133.0 206.0 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76691729323 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.39596269041 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42135616647 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676691729323 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 193.5 290.88556701 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.6764557666 44.8134815571 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.4 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 4.34317383033 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213160360243 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777948820559 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420689027191 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117535838138 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378044195991 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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