More and more people are now considering wearing fashionable clothes very important. Is it positive or negative?
Today, modern and fashionable clothes have become an increasingly important part of people’s lives. this development is extremely negative because people will become more wasteful with their clothes and it will cost them a lot of money to chase after new fashions.
when individuals have a strong desire to wear the most fashionable outfits, they will have a tendency to dispose their old clothes more often. In other words, people will only want to store the lastest designs of apparel in their closets, and thus, they will have to throw away their used clothes of which they consider outdated. For example, an article from The new York Times indicated that the vast majority of teenage Americans threw away more than 100 tons of used clothes every day in 2004 and most of these clothes were only worn for less than a week.
Furthermore, it will cost people a substantial amount of money when they become too fashion-conscious. this is to say that, unlike second-hand and old-fashioned outfits, it is extremely expensive to purchase fashionable ones when they are newly designed and produced, and people will not be able to stop buying products once they are addicted to owning the most fashionable clothes. For instance, a study by the National University in Seoul has reported that a normal Korean man would spend an average number of 50 dollars on new shirts every day.
In conclusion, it is indeed that more and more people have considered that fashionable clothes are essential in their lives; however, this is strongly negative because they will throw their old clothes away more and they will also spend more money to serve their desire.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, second, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99277978339 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64731484339 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534296028881 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.4788932967 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.666666667 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7777777778 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283294173097 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128843208327 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088840043915 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205436882731 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0873395622254 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.